The Endless Balance of an Ancient Sorrow Volume 1 GC Chapter 5 The Word that broke
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The Endless Balance of an Ancient Sorrow Gavern Codex (GC) Volume 1
CHAPTER 5
The Word that Failed
Silus stalked the blood-slick corridors of Palladium Academy like a storm with a pulse, his shoes echoing over the chaos he’d left in his wake. Security guards who’d tried to stop him now lay sprawled or slumped—each one a victim of his Binding Word, forced to end themselves before they could lift a finger.
His voice rang through the hallways, calm but laced with venom.
"Oh Headmaster! Come on out, Mr Hugo Transyn. Don’t be shy! I’ve got all day—and you're the last one standing."
His eyes flicked up at a security camera. He smiled.
In the control office above, Hugo Transyn watched in stony silence, fingers steepled as Silus taunted his image.
“Foolish,” he muttered. “I almost pity him.”
“Sir,” one of his personal guards said, tension cutting through his voice, “we need to evacuate. Let’s get you out of here—now.”
Hugo didn’t budge.
“And miss the chance to make an example of this little anarchist?”
He stood smoothly, adjusting the cuffs of his tailored jacket.
“They’ll send FATE. No doubt about it.”
With one press of a concealed switch, a silent signal was sent.
A failsafe.
A summoning.
If protocol held, Agent-EYE himself would be deployed.
Meanwhile Silus stood over the guards bodies admiring his handy work a slight noise is heard from behind him, Silus turned sharply, sensing a presence that wasn’t cowering or fleeing.
A girl stood down the hall, partially cloaked in flickering emergency light. Alone. Composed. Watching him.
"Who have we here?" he said with a crooked grin. "Don’t be shy."
She stepped forward.
Millana.
Lost in the chaos, separated from Frank. She had followed him into the halls of Palladium, but now she stood face-to-face with its nightmare.
Silus raised a hand. "Come to me now."
Millana didn’t move.
His smile slipped.
"Obey me!" he barked.
Nothing.
His eyes twitched.
"What—why won’t you obey?!"
In the breath of that confusion, Millana dove toward a fallen guard, reaching for his firearm.
But Silus was quicker—he snatched another guard’s weapon from the floor and fired. The bullet cracked the wall inches from her shoulder.
Missed.
She ran.
Adrenaline surged through her. A psycho with a machine gun, shouting magic words that made people die—and yet... they hadn’t worked on her.
“Why not me? What’s different?” she thought, heartbeat drumming in her ears.
She burst into an empty classroom and dove behind the teacher’s desk. The classroom was silent, eerily so, save for the clicking of boots against tile. Silus had followed.
"Come on out, girl," he crooned, voice oozing mock kindness. "It’ll be easier for you than most."
Footsteps crept closer.
Millana scanned the desk.
Two chalkboard erasers.
A snow globe.
She grabbed the erasers and crouched low, eyeing the snow globe. Through its curved reflection, she could just make out Silus—searching, prowling, eyes scanning above where she hid.
Closer.
Almost on top of her.
He turned, just slightly.
Millana sprang up. "Hey, psycho!"
Silus turned right into a blast of chalk dust. Blinded, coughing.
THWACK. Her fist slammed into his jaw.
He stumbled backwards onto the ground, stunned.
Millana ran.
Behind her, Silus’s howl echoed down the corridor.
"You clever little sneak! You’ll pay for that!"
The chase wasn’t over as he followed after her.
2
The morning sun lit up Fraid City like nothing was wrong. The streets buzzed with routine: uniforms, briefcases, schoolbags. But inside the headquarters of FATE, the air pulsed with urgency.
Dozens of armored operatives stormed through the launch bay, strapping on exo-suits, loading advanced rifles, clipping riot gear to their backs. They moved like a hyper-trained swarm—an elite SWAT division with tech so polished it hardly looked human anymore.
Amid the storm, two figures cut straight through the chaos.
One, unmistakable—white helmet with red visor lenses, green battle armor trimmed with a darker cape, twin advanced blasters secured at his hips. The city called him Agent-EYE.
Beside him, Director Valerie Salesta walked with a different kind of power. Athletic, composed, carrying a cold, methodical smirk that could make grown agents blink twice. Her red hair fell in a straight, gleaming curtain behind her. And yes—her figure turned heads. She knew it. Used it. And never once let it define her.
Agent-EYE glanced sideways. “Valerie, you're really sending a strike team over some kid?”
“Yes, I am, EYE, and if you'd actually reviewed the footage, you'd know this isn’t just some kid,” she said, handing him a tablet.
On it, the security feed played. Guards collapsing. Hands turning on themselves. Silus walking through the halls like death in sneakers.
“Why are our operatives killing themselves?” Agent-EYE asked, eyes tracking the footage.
“It’s not them,” she said flatly. “It’s him. Every time he speaks, they drop. Like some kind of supernatural mind-control. That’s why we’re deploying the strike team.”
She looked at him dead-on.
“And I want you to handle it personally.”
Agent-EYE nodded. “Yes, Director.”
“And after that, I want you back on that mystical vigilante case. Is that in any way unclear to you?”
He raised a brow behind the visor. “No problem.”
Agent-EYE walked the gleaming corridors of FATE Headquarters, the clamor of mobilization fading behind him. Past the command deck. Down a side wing rarely used during emergencies. One door slid open with a near-silent hiss.
The restroom—at least, that’s what it looked like. Hard to tell anymore. Technology in this place made everything feel clinical and alien. Could’ve been a cryochamber just as easily as a lavatory.
He stepped toward the mirror.
With a soft click, he removed the white helmet.
And there he was. Vincent Crade.
What was left of him.
His face, once sharp and full of youth, now twisted by seared flesh and tissue warped by flame. Both eyes replaced with cybernetic implants that pulsed faint red light, even without the helmet—glowing remnants of the man the fire had tried to erase.
He stared at himself. Silent.
Every mission, he came here. A ritual. Not for nostalgia.
For clarity.
He saw the reflection—not to remember who he was...
…but to remind himself who he couldn’t be anymore.
The green leather jacket. The cocky smile. Brown spiked hair and top-of-the-class precision. Back then, he was just Vincent—one of the best operatives Palladium Academy ever produced. FATE recruited him early. Trusted him fast.
Then came the building. The explosion.
And Agent-EYE was born.
He locked the helmet back in place with a hiss.
Compassion off.
Mercy sealed.
Duty on.
He turned—and paused.
Someone stood just inside the door. Wide-eyed, awkward. Clutching a rifle like it might vibrate out of his hands.
Jace Williams. Rookie. Probationary FATE operative.
Fanboy.
“Sorry, sir,” Jace said quickly. “Didn’t mean to... just... they said you’d be mobilizing, and I—” he trailed off.
Agent-EYE didn’t move.
Didn’t blink.
Didn’t speak.
Just walked past the kid like smoke through a wall.
The rookie watched him go, breath catching.
He’d seen the red lights inside the helmet.
And now he understood why no one ever called Agent-EYE by his real name. Not that anyone but Valerie knew the name Vincent Crade.
Agent-EYE stood at the threshold of the corridor, helmet locked back in place, red optics glowing steady. Behind him, the young rookie still lingered like a puppy waiting for permission.
"Coming along, Rookie?"
Jace Williams stepped forward, half-salute, half-nervous reflex. “Actually, sir… we were just called back. Director Valerie didn’t want to risk probational agents in the assault on Palladium.”
Eye paused.
“Reassigned, then?”
“Yes, sir. Suicides. A whole string of them. Happened overnight.”
EYE turned slightly. “Then why is FATE involved?”
Williams didn’t miss a beat. “Because every victim had direct ties to The McGullen Corporation. That’s not random. We’re trained to spot patterns—one or two, sure, could be coincidence. But this many?”
EYE said nothing.
Williams went on. “One guy drove his car into a wall. Gas tank ruptured—boom. One of the main shareholders jumped from her high-rise apartment. The corporation CEO or was he the chairman? Anyway that guy… got crushed in a garbage truck. Whole board’s been wiped. Suicide, officially.”
A low hum crackled behind Agent-EYE’s visor. “Interesting.”
He looked up. “Williams—doesn’t the Headmaster of Palladium sit on that board?”
Jace blinked. “Uh… yes, sir. Hugo Transyn. Last surviving member.”
EYE nodded, barely. “Alright. Get on it. You report to me directly. I want eyes on everything. This connects to the academy siege. I want to know how.”
Jace straightened. “Yes, sir! Thank you for the opportunity!”
He rushed off like a bullet with a badge.
Agent-EYE turned and moved with purpose toward the air pad.
Within seconds he was aboard the FATE chopper, sliding into the seat like a loaded weapon waiting to be fired.
“Get us to the academy—pronto.”
The chopper roared to life, engines howling against the bright morning sky as it peeled into the air.
Fraid City’s mask of calm was about to crack wide open.
3
Hugo Transyn sat comfortably in his panic room, unbothered by the carnage above. He sipped tea with one hand, flipping between camera feeds with the other, his expression locked in that trademark smug detachment.
Guards were dying. Silus’s Binding Word continued to turn men into marionettes—snapping triggers, slashing throats, falling like dominoes.
And now, the boy was chasing a student—Millana. Smart girl. Resourceful. More importantly: immune. Somehow, unbelievably, she resisted the Word. That alone made her valuable.
“Oh yes,” Hugo mused aloud, swirling the tea. “FATE will watch her career with great interest… if she lives.”
Another monitor blinked. Another student on the move.
Hugo leaned closer.
Carol. Of course it was Carol. The academy’s queen bee. Smug, adored, always holding court in the quad like it was her royal dominion.
And now? Ignoring every protocol. Wandering out of lockdown like it was a fashion show.
“Oh, Carol,” Hugo smirked. “Let’s see how well that popularity holds up under pressure.”
His gaze returned to Silus just as a new camera caught a clearer angle of the boy’s face. Recognition flared.
The name, the files, the parents.
Crushed by scaffolding held by a faulty McGullen Krane.
The very accident Hugo signed off on.
“I see,” he said softly, setting his tea down with a faint clink. “So that’s what this is about.”
He tapped his earpiece.
“Hamlet.”
“Yes, Headmaster?”
“Send everyone in. Controlled spread. Keep your distance and shoot to kill if you must—but none of the students die. A PR disaster is the last thing I need right now.”
“Yes, sir.” Hamlet peeled away, barking orders into the comms as guards mobilized.
Hugo leaned back, flicking between feeds. Methodical. Cold.
Then… movement.
Not Silus. Not a student.
Something else.
A figure with grey-blue skin. A pointed hat. A high, collared maroon cape. Twin ancient looking books attached to each shoulder like arcane armor.
Hugo’s eyes narrowed.
The vigilante.
The one who'd been interfering with FATE operations. Elusive. Untraceable. Dangerous.
Hugo’s smirk deepened.
“Oh my… he’s here too the so-called vigilante everyone is so nervous about.”
He stood, tea forgotten, arms extended slightly as if the theater of it all demanded applause.
“What a delicious little exercise. the foolish boy will fall, and I’ll take credit for catching the vigilante.”
He laughed.
And laughed.
“If we lose a student or two in the process... well—that’s show business I’d be known as a hero having caught the vigilante.”
4
Frank Gavern—known now across Fraid City only as Sorrow—moved through the shattered halls of Palladium Academy like a shadow with purpose. The grey blue of his skin shimmered faintly in the morning light leaking through broken windows. The twin spellbooks affixed to each shoulder pulsed with runic flickers, alive with ancient energy.
He knew exactly where Silus was.
But that wasn’t his priority.
Not yet.
The students came first.
The sealed auditorium doors loomed ahead. Two guards turned as he approached, snapping into position.
“Freeze, Vigilante. Not another step!”
They opened fire.
The spellbooks blazed golden. A barrier glyph unfolded mid-air, absorbing every bullet like mist hitting glass. With a flick of his hand, Sorrow summoned another incantation—the books flashed again, and a fine yellow dust burst toward the guards. They dropped to the floor, fast asleep.
He stepped through the sealed doors, teleporting inside.
Gasps broke out among the gathered students. Some shrank back. Others leaned forward in awe.
“That’s him…” one whispered.
“Let’s get him!” another student blurted. “We’ll be rewarded for catching the him!”
“Are you nuts?” someone hissed. “Stay quiet!”
Frank raised a calming hand.
“Don’t be afraid. This will all be over soon. I’m going to teleport you to safety.”
“Wait!” a voice called.
Tellai.
“Millana’s still out there. I think she followed that detective—Frank Gavern—they’re both out there!”
Another student chimed in, panicked. “And Carol! Carol’s still out there too!”
Frank’s voice stayed steady. “Alright. No one panic. I’ll find them. I promise.”
He looked to the books.
They pulsed in unison.
A yellow glow shimmered around every student in the auditorium—and in a blink, they were gone. Teleported safely to the school's evacuation zone, right outside on the oval.
Silence fell.
Only Sorrow remained, the weight of the moment settling across his shoulders.
And now—the real work begins.
Sorrow reappeared in a flash of gold-tinted light. Another hallway. Another stretch of battle-scarred campus. Silus was near. He could feel the tension in the air like static, pressing behind the walls.
But before he could move again—
“Ohh, I just knew you’d be here, Mr. Vigilante,” came a silky voice from around the corner.
Carol.
She strut into view like the chaos didn’t exist, voice dripping with triumph. “Right in Millana’s face, too. I knew I’d find you first. Won’t you come with me as proof? We can take a selfie later.”
Frank stared, blank. “Young lady… this school is under siege. Do you even know how dangerous it is in here?”
“Oh, pish-posh,” Carol waved, twirling a lock of her perfect hair. “The guards can handle some lowlife freak. Come on, be a sweet vigilante. Just come with me—I really want to rub this in Millana’s face.”
Frank’s jaw twitched beneath the grey blue skin concealing his Identity. “I suggest you leave. The energy here is thick with death. There’s a killer loose. The others have been evacuated. Go—before things get heated.”
Carol smirked, striking a pose that leaned just far enough to demand attention.
“Things get heated, sir? I am the fire around here.”
She winked. “Come on… you know you’d rather come with me. Pretty please? Hunky vigilante?”
Frank blinked. Once. Twice.
"Are you kidding me right now?" he said flatly. “This is not the time for whatever this is. There’s a supernatural killer roaming the halls and you’re—flirting?”
Carol pouted. “So you don’t want to accompany little ol’ me?”
Frank exhaled sharply through his nose.
“That’s it.”
With a snap of his fingers, the books on his shoulders flickered. In an instant, Carol vanished from the hallway—in mid-pose.
She reappeared on the evacuation oval, still draped in the exact same seductive lean… only now surrounded by dozens of students and teachers.
Every teenage boy within sight turned.
Carol blinked.
Her face turned beet red as the ogling silence set in.
“DON’T look at me like that! This wasn’t for you!”
She stormed off toward the crowd, arms flailing.
Back inside, Sorrow moved on—still not sure whether she was more of a hazard than the actual threat.
Clap. Clap. Clap. The sound cut through the tension like a blade. Hugo Transyn stepped out of his panic room flanked by two armed guards, smug as ever. His long blond hair flowed in perfect waves, and that ridiculous purple-and-gold robe didn’t just scream self-importance—it howled it. “Excellent, excellent,” he purred, still clapping. “Well done, Agent-EYE. Well done. Now take this boy away and execute him. That’s a good man.” Vincent didn’t hesitate. “Shut your mouth.” The words hit like a gunshot. The FATE agents froze mid-step. “You’re lucky I don’t let Silus have you.” Vincent stepped forward, voice sharp as steel. “I should end you where you stand. But Director Valerie has other plans.” Hugo’s smirk twitched. “As of now—you’re relieved of your position at Palladium Academy. Your assets are frozen, pending a full investigation into the McGullen Corporation. And you are hereby charged with negligent homicide—among other things.” He turned to his squad. “Men. Arrest this son of a bitch.” Hugo’s smile finally faltered as cuffs clicked around his wrists. Behind the chaos, Silus watched—bruised and silent, a small smirk curling on his bloodied lips. Justice, at last. Vincent gave Millana a glance on his way out. “Stay out of trouble.” That was it. Short, clipped. But there was something in the tone. Respect? Maybe. And then they were gone—Silus and Hugo, both under FATE custody. The danger had passed. But for Millana... the questions had only multiplied. She joined the others at the evacuation site on the school oval. Faculty, students, and FATE operatives moved in tight formation. Orders were being relayed. The academy would be shut down—temporarily—by official FATE decree. Cleanup. Repairs. And eventually, a new headmaster. And there—at the center of it all—stood Frank. Short blond hair. Calm, commanding presence. The youngest graduate in Palladium history. The youngest licensed detective in all of Fraid City. He didn’t look much older than her. He moved through the crowd, giving orders with quiet precision. Reassuring the staff. Guiding the wounded. Focused. And then, just like that—he was gone. Swallowed by the crowd. Later that very night Millana stood alone under the wide-open sky, the moonlight pouring across her room later that night as she lay staring up at it, eyes wide, mind louder than the silence. FATE. Agent-EYE. Sorrow. Frank Gavern. There was something she couldn’t shake. Some familiarity about him. The rooftop. The cadence of his voice. Something just beneath the surface. She didn’t have the answers. But she had something stronger: Determination.
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